Yes there are mechanical/grammar errors. There are always errors in every story. Don't let them distract you from the genuinely entertaining tale. I hope you like details! Because DETAILS ABOUND. How many chapters are dedicated to the character creation menu? MORE THAN YOU'D THINK. But I still found it interesting, in a munchkin way. It's human nature to maximize. I want more, and am eagerly awaiting the next updates.
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