Go to chapter 4 and read the most liked comment. All the “This is so great” and “Everything is great except the grammar” is bullsh*t. No logic in the story, bad grammar. Useless system. Random powers from other animes, the main character, Vali, changes weapons and is suddenly able to beat someone who is stronger and has more experience multiple times. WebNovel needs to crack down on these trash as* reviews. The author is just plain retarded. There’s nothing else to it, but stupidity.

This story have a lot of potential i just hope author won't drop it. Maybe at early chapters it's slow paced but it's good to build mc powers over time and backround. Keep it up and you have fan in me 😉

Giving 5 stars hoping for you to continue the novel For me it's interesting enough Suggestions I would suggest for him to learn to control haki(will) outside the body instead of the three different hakis with his willpower(haki) energy he can emulate spells that can buff himself because in the marvel universe magic is considered as the manipulation of energy to create phenomena Example of this is iron fist with his chi(jacked up bioelectricity/lifeforce/vitality) to do simple spells that help him in buffing his fists Iron fist is just not cloaking his fist but flowing the energy throughout his arm emulating a chainsaw or just increasing the durability of his fist to counteract the recoil of punching so hard Or having his chi(bioelectricity) flow throughout the body to accelerate the process of healing In which by the way falls into magic in the marvel universe of manipulating of energy to create phenomena So does mutants like jean are sorcerers kind off but not really sorcerers learn from the start and manipulate more or less kinds of energy While mutants like jean or human torch are cheaters having already an affinity to a particular energy which is most of the time very high and they only need training to control said energy but also a disadvantage because it's harder to control other elements/energy because it may conflict with an energy that is already flowing through a mutants body hard but not impossible So we have energy we're just lacking a master to teach him I would like to suggest that if he gets to earth have someone in kama taj to be his master The people in kama taj are not only sorcerers But also warrior monks like mordo I would like to suggest also that his armor/suit to be made from UMF from fantastic fantastic in adapting with different energies /body types with proto-adamantium(vibranium and adamantium) and uru ptadmtm for durability and defense against physical means and uru for the more magical defense and also uru gets stronger with high energy types such as infinity stones or a dimension full of dark energy from the dark dimension to name a few Enchanted by himself(mc)/someone with runes etc. If mc is smart enough add a small ai to keep track of armor status durability etc. Have vali wear power dampeners/gravity item So he can lower his strength and get stronger by doing it I'm not making him do super saiyan training But in theory adding microtears due to exerting more force because of additional gravity and having them repair over time will equal more muscles This will only work in a long term vali is no super saiyan but he can train his muscles until the limit of the body without limiting his agility

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The story is fantastic overall, a good read but the grammar needs fixing around and the way you interpret how asgardians talk. I dont think asgardians would say "no way". The way you make them speak is like how people in the 21st century would speaks and not ancient like(dont know how to describe it). Idk, the way you interpret how they speak really bothers me.

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It is a story that has alot of room to grow only if the author uses what he has at his disposal correctly. The grammer is ok maybe a few small mistakes here and there but thats it.

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