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Kassie
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2019-07-28 17:49

Shameless reader here, writing a 5-star review from the chapters I've read (1-22). The story so far is about a young female officer who is in an undercover mission. This novel is different form what I've read so far and I loved the plot, the characters', and how a flashback and present event is clear. Not like those events where you can't distinguish a flashback from present event. There's also an air of mystery that you wont expect a minor character to have a certain role in the story (you'll know once you read the novel). I recommend you this novel, so pls give a try on reading this. *For the author: I like your work dearest Yunyi so keep up the good work and continue on writing more in the future. Love from your shameless reader. P.S. - pls give us some mass release Dearest Yunyi, I'm hunger for more chapters...

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Yunyi
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Thank you for all the support. I tried really hard to give the story a twist without making it too confusing, so I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. 😘😘

Kassie
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I will support you until the end, dearest Yunyi. Just ignore the criticism that will give you a headache in the future.

Overlord_Venus
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You are blessed to get such loyal readers who enjoy your writing. 😁😁😁

Yunyi:Thank you for all the support. I tried really hard to give the story a twist without making it too confusing, so I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. 😘😘
FlowerSeason
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Oo I like mystery.. how many chaps does the author plan to release? I want to wait till its almost over 😂

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Please can u tell me how to unlock the other chapters

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I found a book its named Story of legends i recommend it book was amazing you should check it out

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Daoist781774:Please can u tell me how to unlock the other chapters
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