Review Detail of JUNKY in CAN'T DELETE THE NOVEL

At first, I thought this novel was one of those CEO romance novels since the title has the word tycoon in it, but I was wrong. There are quite a few grammatical mistakes in your writing, but I can still understand the gist of the story, so you have plenty of room to improve. I hope you flesh out Sun Yi and Xie Huan more as they both seem quite plain other than their extreme book smarts. But based on the synopsis, it doesn't look like Xie Huan has a good future in store for him, or at least he's gonna be forever friendzoned, poor guy.