Review Detail of scrunchypants in The Princess and The Lord

Disclaimer: I’ve only read the first chapter so I gave 3 stars to everything besides writing quality. Regardless of the grammatical errors, the pacing is very odd. There’s a superfluous use of adjectives and many of the sentences are, in a sense, robotic. A lot of points are unnecessarily repeated. I read through it 3x because I would never want to leave a rash review and I did notice many people lauding the unIqueness of the plot. so maybe there’s that? All in all, I found it difficult to read. P.S. If the person who did the coding for this text space ever reads this, please fix the auto-capitalizing upon backspace while within a word.