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Vincent_Nguyen
Vincent_NguyenLv45yr
2019-07-21 20:52

I like the story đź‘Ť Keep update it fluently and story development. I think u can focus more in building the character personality cause MC does not leave a lot of impression. Still keep up u doing great.

Monster Card Master

NeoIsMyName
4.0
99 Chs

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angel701
angel701Lv5

Beta mc? Op mc?

5yr
NeoIsMyName
NeoIsMyNameAuthor

The Mc is not Op

5yr
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LoliWorld
LoliWorldLv6

Brotherhood is not my cup tea is make my body Cold. well dont give up is good story hans : liltle bro max : big bro Hans : big bro im gonna save you Max : i will wait for youbig bro Me : my eyes hurt

5yr

Love2Read26
Love2Read26Lv6

I like this story but the writing quality needs a little work. There are quite a few grammatical errors and redundant statements. The main points are understandable but it is a little difficult to fully enjoy the story.

5yr
shshshibsa
shshshibsaLv5

The story is good, a nice MC not many stupid young masters to just be slapfaced The weak points in my opinion is the description is lacking like the grading colors that is just guessing And i personally like Systems but not when it comes with a store since it kills the heart of the story and the adventures since is so easy to get itens and become op

5yr
seathian
seathianLv15

this isnt really a good story the whole premise of the story is good the idea was a nice one and i hope someone does something like this but the story seems awful really i dont know what else to say im glad the author stuck with it at the end of the day he/she had a nice idea and made a story more than i did lol

5yr
pfoley
pfoleyLv13

The story is worth continuing, but it desperately needs an editor. I like brotherhood stories -- a very welcome relief from the distressingly common harem trash. Aside from grammar and punctuation, more care needs to be put into fleshing scenes out.

5yr
BigAndy79
BigAndy79Lv13

Cool..keep it up..................;????????????????????????????????????,,,,?,:%^^&&#**#;#&#<#<#&#&#*#[#&#&#&#>#[@&#&;Ă·;Ă·;&Ă·&#>#>#>#>#*#&&#;#;#;&#&#*#>##[[#[#[[#

5yr
Nunu_780
Nunu_780Lv14

The story is actually really good better than I thought it would be the characters are really good but they really do just throw out some characters out of nowhere and add information out of nowhere without any forewarning but other than that it's really good

5yr
Valkyrie3420
Valkyrie3420Lv1

Interesting story. The plot is nice, too! Although it is certainly a nice story, the writing quality is a little off. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

3yr
noval_patel
noval_patelLv4

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4yr
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