Yaay! Vampire story.. For some reason, I have this craziness over vampires. Your story is easy to read and its progressing really good. Trust me, It's way better than Twilight series.😂 I didn't find anything wrong with your grammar , even if there was any it won't be noticed. Your writing quality is really good, I hope I can be as good as you are.
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LIKEI have had a crush on Vampire stories since Anne Rice's An Interview With A Vampire like when I was 14 XD And many people have commented that I actually have this "vampiric temperament" going on like an aura XDDDD. As for Twilight and other similar stories, I don't really view them as "vampire stories", more like romances with a little vampire elements. I sorta just noticed that the website was actually holding a Twilight fanfic writing contest. :D Wanna smash them but I'm not really in this area so too bad. XDDD
Haha... There's this another series True Blood which I love too.. and Vampire Academy.. I like those series, it doesn't bore me even if I read it million times. It has its charm and same here, even my friends call me a vampire because I'm awake at night😂😂 and run a cold temperature. I wish I was one though😂