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The auxiliary chapter in the front was a good choice. It really drew me in right from the start. The pacing of the story is not forced at all, and the plot is moving forward at a steady pace. The author describes the scenes and interactions with vividness that makes it a joy to read. It is not overly descriptive to the point where it sometimes gets in the way of the reading. With a few grammar mistakes that are able to overlook, this (as of chapter 7) is a book that I'm excited to read more of. There is some amazing world building and story development going on and I can't wait for more. I also quite like the main character, Leona, so far. Keep up the good work, author! :)

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Vampire: the Masquerade - Nirvana

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Yeeeee thx XD

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Speaking of MC, I always wanted to build a REAL STRONG female lead. While lots of the books that claimed to have one, many of them are mainly surviving on their boons or the men who are "so attracted to them for their beauty and cleverness"(my ass) and can't bear great frustrations properly with their own wisdom and composure.