Review Detail of KageMugen in Vampire: the Masquerade - Nirvana
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The writting is beautiful even though there are a lot of mistakes ... well according to me and English is my 3rd language so not really confident in many of the things I see wrong. I think she's is supposed to be used for she is and not was but maybe I am wrong. Anyway the dialogues and the interraction beween the 2 main characters so far make it flow like a river. Seriously I can only rate it with 5 stars since World building is unnecessary and grammar mistakes although plenty are not nowhere near enough to make me want to stop or having trouble understanding the meaning. Mostly just problems with tense selection and a, an, the ... Anyway, all fives for me. I am actually glad there are only 3 chapters so far or I would continue reading.
Vampire: the Masquerade - Nirvana
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Thanks! I'm Chinese actually, but I'm studying in an English-speaking country and working as a translator, too, so I presume my language is ok :p It's probably because I try to make my writing style more easy-to-read and close to daily, oral conversations, so I'm very casual about grammars XD Anyway thanks a bunch, glad you like it and give the five stars despite everything LOL
Well, it deserved 5 stars for the plot ... Which honestly would be a bit predictable if I figured out what VtmB meant. But still I liked it and the minor mistakes don't destroy it like with some works where they mix up words and you have to guess the meaning.
Fiona_Singer:Thanks! I'm Chinese actually, but I'm studying in an English-speaking country and working as a translator, too, so I presume my language is ok :p It's probably because I try to make my writing style more easy-to-read and close to daily, oral conversations, so I'm very casual about grammars XD Anyway thanks a bunch, glad you like it and give the five stars despite everything LOL