Review Detail of Gourmet_DAO in Vampire: the Masquerade - Nirvana

Gosh, I felt severely flattered tbh. Thank you for this, and allow me to also recommend the original game XD it will probably differ greatly from my work but it's still cult classic.

Playing computer games is great, but it’s a pity, this stage has already been passed! Scientific studies are more exciting))) But thanks!

Oh, so the author manages to describe buildings in this way, I wonder, will we return to this building? I recall a review from a literary critic when I described the Eastern table in detail in the competition work ... but then it never came back to the text ... and the critics are angry people, although quite nice people come across. Candles are always associated with some cult events. An interesting move. And what is this "dress of champagne"? This airgown is the color of champagne? Not entirely clear. Interestingly, why did the topic of vampires appear in your work? In the 21st century it is difficult to write an original work ... since many images have already been beaten in classical literature, second-class fanstastika, anime, manga, short stories, runes, dramas, visual and web short stories, light short stories ... films and so on. .. There are no original plots to find ... for some reason this moment in chapter 5 reminded me of a scene from "twilight" ... Although I, like Renoir, do not like horrors, there are enough of them in the world, is it not better to write about something good? , bright. But this is my vision. I do not impose it. Or is vampire a part of European culture ??? Especially in the myths and sagas of Northern Europe, there are often trolls, hot goblins, mountain trolls, and all sorts of other ... probably this is northern folklore, snow, cold, the landscape gave birth to such creatures. Not that the cute image of Sun Vukuna and the spirits of the mountains, the rivers that the monk wanted to eat. I saw this movie in Tiwi in Beijing; somehow this image came to me. Well, this is probably the difference of mentality and culture. Uhhh ... all the same I don’t like myself, this is a subjective opinion ... and it’s easy to read, the text is beautiful. Not like novice authors abuse specific - medical or psychological terms, known only to specialists. The images are quite colorful, even I would say too realistic. The author is the master of the word, as I already mentioned earlier, she knows how to convey through the text the colorful images of her fantasy, which appears to the reader as an artistic form. Good luck to the author in creative endeavors. Regards

Wow did you really get that much in just one chapter XD I would say you are dwelling too much on the details, though it's good considering right now nobody reads that carefully, and I really appreciate the efforts, but it's like you don't use a microscope to observe a painting, if you get what I mean :D

Only this is not one chapter from 4 to 11)) This all comes from the university. We scored school textbooks under the microscope. It has already eaten into consciousness. On the other hand, literary critics, so walked through my work, they were even more corrosive ... rolled out in full. If a gun hangs on the wall and it is described in the novel, then at the end of the work it should shoot ... and if not, then why describe it in such detail? Something like this)))

Of course, to watch a picture with a microscope, the view of the overall picture is lost, but on the other hand you have the opportunity to find another one under one picture, another one. As usual, it happens in real life. But I understood what you meant. If you treat obozu easy, just for fun, then you are absolutely right !!!