Review Detail of JoanB in The Sorceress: Blossoming Power

I love to read fantasy and historical stories and this book is one of the results. I thought of writing this with a Chinese background, but after much thinking and consideration, I decided to make it an open background. A new world, different countries with different languages and several worlds where magic and non-magic inhabitants exist. My main character is a young and learning Sorceress who got entangled with kingdom conspiracies and struggles between human with powers and those with none. Then her predecessor gave her the task to bring back balance to this chaotic mythical world. No harem, no rape, no face slapping, no sex. There might be a few violence but I described them vaguely and in simple terms. I'll try my best to give a good story. If I have mistakes, tell me and I'm open to listen. I wish reviews will help me with the things I missed in the story. So, please, give constructive criticisms. I prefer to write slowly so I can study a chapter well before publishing than writing for fast updates but making my story suffer. I also want to write with lesser or no plotholes. In case, I have one or if the characters gave off a poor show of emotions, just tell me in the comment. I would appreciate it. I think that's all I want to say. Thank you for taking the time to read my story.