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vagos45
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2019-08-07 17:57

This is unreadable. Desperately needs an editor. It is unfortunate too because i think it is a great novel. I mean, who doesnt want a rtw like novel in medieval Europe.

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Artimer
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Do you want to be the editor ? Because Translator-kun do a raw translation and I have to edit it to make it more understandable and English is not my main language, french is. So I ask again do you want to be the editor ( to me it’s more a corrector of grammar that I need)

vagos45
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Unfortunately i do not have the time. I hope you can find one however. And thank you for the work you have put in translating it. I understand that it must be hard especially when English is not your native language.

Artimer:Do you want to be the editor ? Because Translator-kun do a raw translation and I have to edit it to make it more understandable and English is not my main language, french is. So I ask again do you want to be the editor ( to me it’s more a corrector of grammar that I need)
Artimer
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No problems

TheOriginalSwed
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Still looking for an editor?

Artimer:No problems
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