this isn't a deep story. this isn't even really a massive super hit. but. it has a charm. the characters are fun. the scenes are fun. the system is fun. and isn't that all we really ask for in a story? something that is just fun?
Marchen
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LIKEI really do like this story. It has some spelling errors and stuff, but hey so does mine so I won't hold that against you. I do think you're getting better though. I mean even the stuff I didn't like wasn't enough to make me not read it. It has ups and downs but as long as it isn't taken to serious I think it can be enjoyable. Just keep on working man. I know you can get this to be a really good story.
Marchen:Thx for the review. I appreciate it man. Good luck with you story too.