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FantaticLv24yr
2020-03-03 06:38

Author after reading this story for some time now. I've seen you improve your writtinf skills. I am still enjoying your story and hope you release more soon.

Anime/Cultivation System

Marchen
4.5
72 Chs

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Marchen
MarchenAuthor

Thx for the review. Your comment you deleted was pretty funny 😂😂😂.

4yr
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Marchen
MarchenAuthor

I went back and fixed the first chapters. My writing has improved compared to before. I use grammerly so there isn't spelling mistakes but I might still have some. I release chapter's Friday and Saturdays now sometimes Sunday. I hope you all like the story try it out and I would really appreciate you all reviewing my novel.

5yr

Fantatic
FantaticLv2

I enjoy how the story is progressing it's interesting. Keep up the goodwork author. Keep writing chapters and don't drop and I will keep on supporting.

5yr
queenV
queenVLv4

Amazing story line. I love how the characters are developed. The mc is really amazing love his personality. Keep the story up looking forward to the rest.

5yr
FurinjiSaiga
FurinjiSaigaLv1

I like it good job man little bit of spelling errors but it's fine. I can't wait to read the rest of the story looking forward to it. Keep up the good work.

5yr
Kaio_Alxandr
Kaio_AlxandrLv3

So far I'm enjoy it! You can really tell how your writing style has improved throughout the chapters. Good job man! I would say to be a little more careful with punctuation and be a little more aware of the pace of the story-- should keep the flow from going too fast but don't make it too slow with a bunch of details. Other than that, you did pretty good. Looking forward to more chapters.

5yr
BJB
BJBLv5

I really like the character development and all the character s he gathers into his faction. I wish you would update morr often though. ** I like your avatar of Bam

4yr
Jasonenrick
JasonenrickLv14

I really liked it how it begins but Bro you make no sense and i really can't get myself to read more . You basically waste all his points and literally everything he has on his gf and wait a minuite isn't she already as strong as Saint 9 -_- -_-. Sorry but this really pisses me off and i really don't get myself to read it with his gf. The first thing she does after they met in the new world is ....nothing. He gave her all this and she just stands ther like it is natural that he does this for her and it pisses me off how he is so weak compared to his gf and lrt's look back. He has 7 wishes and his gf is basically on top of the world from the start and he is like a bug /ant and it would all have been okay if she would be more thankful but she isn't he sents 1 million from 5 million of his points for stones she can use and she doen't even says anything and just stsrts to cultivate ?????? OK i stop writing because i would just get worse . The idea is really great and i would love to read this story if either ... 1. His gf doesn't exits. 2. She is much more thankful to him. 3. You don't make her as strong as she is from the beginning but either the MC should

5yr
Naruto_King
Naruto_KingLv1

Super anime. I gave this story a 4 star in everything but stability since it uploads daily a lot. It is cool. At times I was kind of bored? It's long. And slow. But then it will be super fast. I don't know. It has good grammar most of the times. Sometimes it fails at that though. It was good though. I liked it.

4yr
RainyLiquid2020
RainyLiquid2020Lv4

this isn't a deep story. this isn't even really a massive super hit. but. it has a charm. the characters are fun. the scenes are fun. the system is fun. and isn't that all we really ask for in a story? something that is just fun?

4yr
queenV
queenVLv4

After months of reading this novel it is by far one of my favorites. In love with all the characters, MC's girlfriend is my favorite though, and I like the interesting & unique storyline. Hopefully this novel will continue releasing more chapters!!

5yr
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