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Qing_kaang
Qing_kaangLv35yr
2019-07-15 00:14

Keep going, I think that the backgrounds and relations between the characters can use some additional work, but I like where it is going. I'll give you tips if I see anything of note. Good book! Keep it up!

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Yang_Studio
4.6
155 Chs

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Yang_Studio
Yang_StudioAuthor

Thank you so much for your review :)

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WangShu
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I really like where this novel is going, but it needs more chapters to accurately judge it. Please please keep writing ♥ I think it really has potential.Some chapters are super steamy

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Acharya_Priyanka
Acharya_PriyankaLv3

The book seems to be fun. In fact I like the turn it is taking more than your first novel. It seems comical in some cases, and that is a writing style that I enjoy very much! Caution - Strictly for adults.

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Garima_Dhami
Garima_DhamiLv3

On the 22nd chapter. I really like where this novel is headed to. By the way - thank you for writing and uploading chapters at such a good pace

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Ecorean_Ecorean
Ecorean_EcoreanLv3

Interesting !! Interesting !! Interesting !! Interesting !! Interesting !! Interesting !! Interesting !! Interesting !! Interesting !! Interesting !! Interesting !! Interesting !! Interesting !! Interesting !! Interesting !!

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LiNa_Author
LiNa_AuthorLv3

Keep going bud! I like the consistency with which you update this novel. It is going well! It reminds me a little of mix between the alladin movie and a **** movie i saw a few days back. Its a good weekend read.

5yr
snowfall2233
snowfall2233Lv3

Damn !! This is some good ****.. I love how the story starts.. Keep up the good work !! Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!Keep up the good work !!

5yr
Jyotish_Garima
Jyotish_GarimaLv3

I love this story so far. Has a very mysterious arabic desert type feel. Loved it. Waiting for the genie to shows its colors Keep up the good work

5yr
KaizenWei23
KaizenWei23Lv3

Ok !! Good BOOK. pREDictable. There is a loser..and He is GOING to get HIS life CHANGED by A genie. very hot and steamy scenes. 18+ ting a ling ling. ting a ling ling

5yr
Jyotish_Garima
Jyotish_GarimaLv3

Here we go.. Here we go.. Here we go... Here we go.. Here we go.. Here we go.. Here we go.. The journey begins..whom would the genie visit ?

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