Review Detail of amaturewriter in Zachary Potter: A Squib's Tale
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this is not a review....2 stars for effort? -the entire idea is stupid, humanity is a race that has racism towards color and even nationality...the wizards are a race that thinks of muggles as beneath them [or as interesting creatures], if either world tries to contact the other, there wont be any relationships build, hell it would be a war....all religions would immediately call them heathens, scientists would want to experiment on them, normal people would both fear them and be envious of them whilst on the otherhand wizards would despise them..war would happen and most likely muggles would die easily cause I am saying wizards would win,,,,sure muggles have nuclear weapons and a larger army and population...BUT wizards have magic, I mean they are able to easily create mini dimensions...remember the tiny house in book four or newts magic brief case, that **** had a world inside it..those weren't even any weapon ****, just everyday ****....imagine if they created weapons, wizards would win..or they could just unleash dementors....probably kill of every human in less than a week. point is your idea is retarded......................................
Zachary Potter: A Squib's Tale
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Wow, looking at your other reviews, you live off of pure hate and F-bombs. All this may exist in YOUR HP AU, but it doesn’t exist in Rowling’s world, and it doesn’t exist in mine. In ours, Filch has a job, half-bloods exist, and Dumbledore has a direct phone link to the PM, where they have civilized and cooperative conversations. So feel free to soak in your negativity and vitriol until your fingers get all pruney.
you are quite stupid arnt ya....what is the first line written?...this is not a review...entire thing I said was what thought would happen..**: perhaps you dont understand english cause clearly you've misunderstood my reviews....i my reviews I suggest and say what I thought about,,,and if I say something negative about it, I explain, there no hate....honestly why would hate a book?
CMShuk:Wow, looking at your other reviews, you live off of pure hate and F-bombs. All this may exist in YOUR HP AU, but it doesn’t exist in Rowling’s world, and it doesn’t exist in mine. In ours, Filch has a job, half-bloods exist, and Dumbledore has a direct phone link to the PM, where they have civilized and cooperative conversations. So feel free to soak in your negativity and vitriol until your fingers get all pruney.
**: next time dont assume every negative comment about your book is a bash, filled with hate...............though I will accept that calling your hard work retarded was kinda cruel
CMShuk:Wow, looking at your other reviews, you live off of pure hate and F-bombs. All this may exist in YOUR HP AU, but it doesn’t exist in Rowling’s world, and it doesn’t exist in mine. In ours, Filch has a job, half-bloods exist, and Dumbledore has a direct phone link to the PM, where they have civilized and cooperative conversations. So feel free to soak in your negativity and vitriol until your fingers get all pruney.