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Maurz
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2020-09-29 01:26

Not the worst, but the writing is cringe most of the time, MC makes pretty stupid wishes, dialogue is braindead.............................

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Infamous_Fitz
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Plus it seems like the author is trying to save every single saiyan, he also gives gine immortality and wishes bardock back and to me for someone who never met either one of them and possibly saving raditz just cause he is family maybe even nappa. The story just seems like it's post to be save all the Saiyan's and live a happy life

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