Love the story so far. Whether it be the writing quality, the pace of the story, and depth of characters, I can it’s very well done. The beginning was a little rushed at some part like the training, but it makes sense because the story really doesn’t even start until the mc is untrapped. Also, the stability is pretty good, one and sometimes even two a day! Again, awesome story and I hope you get the recognition you deserve soon. Please keep updating!
HotIce
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LIKEPyrozian:So this review was paid for apparently, or something similar, cause the writing quality is second, maybe third grade level