Review Detail of grimmhorizon in Harry Potter and the Dual Lord

when i first started reading this i really enjoyed it. i loved the backstory except gods but that's just me . the story was amazing and then the mc leaves Hogwarts and bam **** goes weird. wtf??the story was progressing great up til then, i mean come on dude hes only 11 years old and what happen to protecting harry in the shadows or something. god complex please he'd get rekt by dumby. all hes a master at is mind powers. honestly your not to far yet and could redo from before he went bat **** crazy or at least wait til puberty