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FrozenSynapses
FrozenSynapsesLv105yr
2019-07-30 03:36

This author is great! The writing quality is perfect, easy to read and understand. The story is interesting and slightly unexpected, albeit in a good way. The world and characters are very detailed and come to life. Looking forward to the next chapters to come!

Universal Knowledge of the Dao

d3trois
4.5
108 Chs

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Mavislin11
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The writing quality is definitely good. The world building is also quite fantastic. Worth a read. The charts and plot are very specific, which is a good thing.

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Peak_Dao_Master
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I like the original take on cultivation novels, with a girl completely powerless and who doesn't want to be there even. I'm curious to see how it will evolve, but so far the characters a good and interesting, the world building is nice. Also the writing is really good, keep up the good work author !

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ShinSungmi
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I don't see much problems in the grammar, and the writing style is satisfactory! It's an amazing story 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄

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dumdum007
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I like how the story builds up. How the characters are sketched. It's catchy. The English is pretty good too and there aren't grammatical errors that will irk someone while reading the book. If anyone who likes to read cultivator stories then they should definitely try this one.

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d3trois
d3troisAuthor

I'm gonna be concise, I hope you enjoyed my story. The uploading schedule is really messy because it's my side story for now. I obviously allow constructive criticism, so please tell me in the comments or the reviews how to make my story better according to you. Thank you !

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