Review Detail of deadbluedevil in WHAT IF YOU WERE FORCED TO BECOME A PRINCE?

Well its the author here, HI EVERYONE!!. I'm shamelessly reviewing my own novel, which makes me seem desperate. WHICH I ACTUALLY AM!!, DEAR READERS I know my writing sucks, but i'm trying to improve it, soooo PLEASE bear with me. Actually i'm pretty lonely cuz no one seems to want to write a review, Please i don't even want a positive one, you can even diss my novel, i wont mind, JUST WRITE ONE!!. For the sake of moral support, just help this lonely guy out ok . AND A BIG HEARTFELT THANKS TO THE PEOPLE WHO HAVE READ THIS NOVEL, seriously watching that slowly crawling view counter is my only motivation, *SIGH*