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Review Detail of IceSnowball in We Will Meet Again

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IceSnowball
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This story started off well with a very interesting introduction. The writing quality was good with minimal mistakes and the author created vivid imagery. "But that did not matter to her; she finally found it. Her one clue." - I felt that that this part was a bit direct - maybe it would flow better with description in the previous paragraph about how the butterfly piqued her interest and it might be a clue. I felt that 'later on' in this passage was a little repetitive: "Later on, when she got her gold membership card from her father, Shinji came with her to the library every day. Setsura thought it was just a coincidence, but later on, she learned that just like her, he was curious about the butterfly too." I wonder why Shinji was curious about the butterfly - is that because of his sincere attitude to Setsura or maybe he's related to the mystery in this story. I'm curious about whether Setsura has powers and what happened in her past. Good job😊

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