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Muireann
MuireannLv135yr
2019-08-28 11:16

I always look forward to updates for this novel. The author's style is very clean and detailed. The emotions portrayed feel very real and genuine; it's clear the author cares a lot about the characters and the novel. The book works on two storylines for the main character at first: his reality and a virtual reality. They are tied together quite neatly after the initial introductions to both, making for a really compelling tale. I look forward to each storyline every time there's a context change!

Oh Mr General!

Over_The_Horizon
4.6
241 Chs

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Over_The_Horizon
Over_The_HorizonAuthor

I wasn't going to write a review for myself until I had achieved something. Today, I reached 100k words on my novel and so I will be writing out a message to the future readers of Oh Mr General! Firstly, I write this novel purely to entertain my readers and so if you like the novel, you can leave comments and reviews so as to have a chance to change the plot line slightly. Secondly, I do not edit my chapters after writing and so sometimes, the spelling and grammar may not be there. In my hectic schedule, I do not actually had the time to write and edit the chapters altogether. So please bear with it :'). I hope you will enjoy this novel as much as I enjoy writing it.

5yr

Ketten
KettenLv13

Love the story and the characters. Great writing. Really deserves more attention! The mix of the real world and the virtual world is interesting and compelling. Thank you, author. Keep it up, please!

5yr
lloadingl
lloadinglLv3

The language used in this story is highly effective in conveying and describing the different scenes and emotion. The sentences and phrases are clean and simple to understand but definitely does not lack in detail.

5yr
Astale
AstaleLv14

Great story. Reviewing it hoping it can get some more attention. Love the storyline. Looking forward to seeing where it goes. Sato and Gray, the main character, are quite cute! The relationship between the two is revealed and develops at a nice pace.

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Lexmine
LexmineLv10

Lovely novel author keep it going,.... 😍😘😍😘😍😍😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😘😍😍😍😘😘😍😘😍😍😘😘😘😍😘😍😍😘😍😍😘😍😘😘😘😘😍😘😘🖤❣💛💜💗🖤💜🖤💝🖤💜❣❣🖤🖤❤💓💗💗💖💖💕💖💓💓💓💙💗💗💗💙💙💙💙💓💓

5yr
Introvert_Lioness
Introvert_LionessLv13

Please dear author release already some new updates 🙏🙏🙏... I already miss the story... I already miss the MCs... Please give some time to release updates... Please........

4yr
Lexmine
LexmineLv10

Lovely novel author, the characters are well defined I really like this story line, keep it up author, 💌💟💟💝💞💚💜💛💝💜💛💜💛💛🖤💝💙💖💕🖤💞💞💞🖤❣💜💛💜💝💝🖤💜💜💜💝🖤💜🖤💝🖤💜🖤💝💙💗💛💕💖💝💝🖤💕💕💕💖💝💞💞💝🖤💜💜💝💙💗

5yr
Age_Knox
Age_KnoxLv6

Love this story... Reviewing in hope it gets more attention... Highly recommend you read... 🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍🥰😍

5yr
Martins_Townsend
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