Review Detail of Lazy_Bitch13 in The First Order

It's actually a good book despite a lot of people saying it's not worth it. It's well written, the plots are good, the characters are not cardboard cutouts, and the world building is unique and pretty well made. I think you'll not regret reading this one. I'm not gonna go over the good parts of this book as a lot of good reviews were already in the review section. Let's go over the parts that needed more work from the author.First is the weak romance. I sincerely think that the romance part was unnecessary. Especially if you are an author that was not good at it, the same with the author of this book. But before I elaborate, I still have to commend the effort of the author in creating at least a decent romantic plot where there is no harem and there was loyalty with the MC and FL. Now, let's go over why it's weak. First of all, I didn't get how they suddenly just said to anyone they know that they like each other when they never have ever have recollections and reflection of how they just fall to each other. The author made situations, that most of the time are forced, so that these two can have a moment. Which is bad, because it felt unnatural. One factor was also that the author was not good enough to create a romantic situation amidst the survival part of the story. The story has the tint of darkness and seriousness with death as the consequence if they just perform weakly. There is an emphasis towards being stronger so that they have to live. Pair this with a subpar romance that was just inserted while forcing some plots and sacrificing some plots for the main plot, will just bring down the story. The romance part was not placed correctly and it was also not that believable, strong, relevant, and endearing to the hearts of the reader or at least to me. One of the factors also was because I was already antagonizing the FL, I don't hate her character but if you are going to make a romantic interest, the readers should also love her the way the MC loves her, or at least they can see and understand the reason why he loves her. The FL was the cold and unemotional type so most of the conversation between the two are stale, it got better around chapter 300-400 but was still not a likable character in my eyes. Now that I am writing this, i can't really see how the MC liked her, I can't find reasons that I at least have to refute. There were just so few developments, then the author just decided to say yeah they are already madly in love with each other. The worst thing was, if it was Li Xiaoyu, his sister, or Zhou Xiaoyu(?), his maid, I can still understand and be glad with the romantic parts because they have chemistry with the MC and at least they are likable and reflective type of characters. It's like the FL is inside a black box while these two females are in two transparent box, I can understand them while I hardly even know about the FL. Towards chapter 500s onwards or at least chapter 700 where Im currently at, the story has become direction less. There was no clear motivation. Like the MC will state his motivation to find his brother and family but the way he acts most of the time was not in line with this, the author was forcing him to different subplots and he just went out with it. Its not highly obstructing but with all the chaos happening and will happen, it feels unrewarding. He was also not developing, it's been 300 chapters but he never had new abilities or improvements in his power. There was no new task, there was I think only two the one gave a basic copy and one was one dexterity. He didn't need new abilities, just some improvements like improved knowledge or fighting styles will do but nada he just got a new maid and every achievement of the maid will turn into him as he was her master. It's still entertaining but I was thinking the plot will elevate but it became static, I hope the next few chapters will be good.Just lessen the force plotting and have some motivation and direction and it will turn for the better.