Review Detail of Blazzing18 in Dragon God System

I just finished reading this book and it is awesome. I hope u come back. I really like the hole plot and everything.. there are a couple things I would change but but its awesome for the most part. If you wont come back to write can you message me I really would like to continue it.. if u dont message me I might just take it anyways and go from where it stopped because it deserves to be finished