I really liked it Only the grammar had problems I'll jus keep up to date More updates Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Lo veeeeee eeeeee eeeeee Itttttttttttttt

This is really amazing piece of work and can’t believe it rated so low This is really amazing piece of work and can’t believe it rated so low This is really amazing piece of work and can’t believe it rated so low This is really amazing piece of work and can’t believe it rated so low

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I could bear with the author's grammar since english isn't his main language but there are too many mistakes in other points. Romance was very forced to the point that he was already calling the princess of the Yan Empire his future wife after they had just met in a single chapter. He doesn't act like someone who was trapped and ignored by his father for 8 years. I would continue to read the novel since I like ones with systems but there is no doubt that this novel doesn't can't even stabilize itself.

Tbh writing quality is ****e why the hell do you use "her" with a male an culture method? And again sorry to be blunt the story has great potential but no matter how good the plot is or other things About it in generel it will be ****e with bad grammar

Way to disappointed I m with the story and also with you author I m not want to force my opinion but new chapters make me disgust about mc ant the novel 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

I really think they should update more.

An excellent casual book with great story elements and alot of ass kicking. The system is actually useful and intelligent unlike other system novels

Very sad that it was dropped cause it was very fun to read and i was expecting the story to become something with hundreds of chapters... such a shame