Review Detail of anon88 in dropped no time to write and no inspiration sorry

This is a review of the first three chapters. The story is a mashup of a baseball and cultivation story. The main character(?), Jace, is a very old ninja assassin/cultivator who is reborn into a different world. In his new life, he is adopted into a baseball obsessed family. The story is interesting but the grammar is bad. There are many run-on sentences and problems with inconsistent verb tense. The author needs an editor. Overall, the story itself is promising but poor grammar brings this story down.