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ShinSungmi
ShinSungmiLv45yr
2019-07-13 08:50

There are few grammar errors, and it needs to be proofreaded. Other than that, it has a amazing plotline, and keep up with the good work!!😄😄

Hero of The World

INeedRest
4.7
80 Chs

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INeedRest
INeedRestAuthor

I would try. Thank you for the review.

5yr
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Doucette
DoucetteLv15

Amazing. It is good story with good English. It have potential to be great story. I like Ned so far since he have good chance got various women and magic in world. I hoping that he got badass bloodline later in story

5yr

Alien_Space_Bat
Alien_Space_BatLv5

Neeeeeeeed mooooooooreeee💜💙😍😍🙏 Neeeeeeeed mooooooooreeee💜💙😍😍🙏 Neeeeeeeed mooooooooreeee💜💙😍😍🙏 Neeeeeeeed mooooooooreeee💜💙😍😍🙏 Neeeeeeeed mooooooooreeee💜💙😍😍🙏

5yr
alienpu55y
alienpu55yLv1

Could have used some sex scenes What happened to girls in the prologue? Seemed like Ned was about to have fun until he got the powers and sh*t... pretty dissapointed!

5yr
KindredSpirit
KindredSpiritLv6

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Weirdo
WeirdoLv6

Great story with good world building... I was astonish that there's a lot of people reading it, but didn't comment about the chapter... Anyway, you have a great story, so do keep up since even when there's no one commenting your chapter, there's still a lot of people reading it!!! Go go go!!!

5yr
PsyberRose
PsyberRoseLv12

This is part of a review swap and at the time of reading, there are 24 chapters. However, writing this now as I already have a general gist of the novel. Writing Quality: English isn't my first language, so any minor grammatical errors aren't noticeable to me. As long as the reading is smooth, I am happy. This is smooth enough for me. :) Stability of Updates: 5* in good faith. Story Development/Character Design/World Background: The story itself is different from what I initially expected from the synopsis, so would advise the Author to change it a bit. This is more game-based like Night Ranger style, though it's not that he goes into a game. So that is what makes it different and unique for me. I've always like this sort of style, so it's a plus for me. The way it develops and progresses is also well done. It's interesting and I'm sure it'll only get better as more chapters come out (with the magic and fighting stuff, that is). All the best, Author!

5yr
Shiksha_Jerath
Shiksha_JerathLv5

Reveal spoiler

5yr
Mavislin11
Mavislin11Lv12

For some weird reason, this is more game based than other novels I've read. I'm digging the style though. Reminds me of Shield Hero. Keep it up!

5yr
Cynk_Napp
Cynk_NappLv5

Building chapter by chapter. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more. Waiting for more.

5yr
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