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Review Detail of Shiksha_Jerath in Her Sole Desire

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Shiksha_Jerath
Shiksha_JerathLv54yrShiksha_Jerath

Since the story is still in its early stages, I'll give one extra star to each category... Writing Quality: The author uses concise words and doesn't linger on at any point which is a plus for me. I would like to commend the author for no glaring grammatical errors which are a far cry from most novels on this site.🙂 Stability of Update: I am not concerned with this since sometimes a writer needs more time to flesh out the details. 5/5 Story Development: The author has set a fast pace for the story which is all right, I suppose but I would prefer a bit more details added in. However, that might just be my preference as other readers might like the story to main the same pace moving forward. 🙂 Character Design: The story is just three chapters in so can't say much about it. It seems the FL has experienced many things while she was abroad which is why she isn't fazed by the taunts of her aunts at the restaurant. World Background: The author hasn't provided the refers with much as of now but it might just be because the story is in its early stages and the details might be added along the way as the story progresses. Overall - An uncut gem that has a chance to shine through once it's polished. 🙂🙂 All the best to the author.

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Her Sole Desire

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Shiksha_Jerath
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*the story to maintain the same pace *hasn't provided the readers

IceSnowball
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Thank you for your review😊