Review Detail of readtokilltime in Prime Originator
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Alright so I've read till chapter 230, which is about halfway through the novel and here is what I think is wrong with the story and what I also love about it. 1)Pro:Great premise, I like the fact he has alchemy knowledge and the revenge you can see he is bound to get 2)Pro: good development, good grammar 3)Con: Multuole betrayals and he still believes in people off the bat and is naive. 4) Con: no world background, I can't tell you if it's a modern world or cultivation, or a western type world. 5) Con: he goes out of his way constantly to please girls, even if there the enemy and gives this girl a bug secret technique that could be detrimental in the wrong hands if she decides to hand it to her tribe.
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he had 1 in his last life against him and his dad with someone they trusted, and 1 when he was reborn with getting poisoned , idk what else but he constantly says he can't trust people because of all the betrayals he had. I would quote it but I forgot the chapter number. It's a good book though, you might like it. try it out
Fi3l:Could you list all the betrayals that has happened to him?
He's in the middle. Not overly good but not evil neither, kills when he needs to and saves when he needs too.
PASSIVESPAMMER:Does mc has a hero complex?
readtokilltime:He's in the middle. Not overly good but not evil neither, kills when he needs to and saves when he needs too.