Review Detail of Pointbreak in Prime Originator
Review detail
Hello you, yes, you, the lost and curious reader. I see you have stumbled upon my unholy sanctuary in search of something fun and interesting to read. I cannot say the early chapters are my best work, but it is my first book so do give it a try if you are willing to give this book a chance and allow me to entertain you.
Prime Originator
Pointbreak
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JimmyBlah:1. Why have I not heard of this yet. 2. That synopsis was sęxy asf, thank you for the eye-gasm. 3. I see we have a gura fanimage
Thank you for the praise😬 Maybe you haven’t heard of this story because I am unreliable with updates and dont get big features, so it is usually off the radar and in the trash somewhere, waiting for people to pick it out😭
JimmyBlah:1. Why have I not heard of this yet. 2. That synopsis was sęxy asf, thank you for the eye-gasm. 3. I see we have a gura fanimage
author i wan't to ask some questions before i start reading and those are 1)will there be drama with mc harem 2)will mc love his harem 3) will mc care for them and last 4)will the harem of mc follow him(and not be like all the cultivation novels/manhua where the harem is left behind for the next 50-100 chapters)
There’s little drama between one hArem member and mc but no drama between harem members. Mc has will one main love interest but he Will can for harem memBers with equal love. And yes, they will follow Mc. MC wont leave them behind when he travel to new worlds and realms
Thesoultaker88:author i wan't to ask some questions before i start reading and those are 1)will there be drama with mc harem 2)will mc love his harem 3) will mc care for them and last 4)will the harem of mc follow him(and not be like all the cultivation novels/manhua where the harem is left behind for the next 50-100 chapters)
if it's any comfort, although I haven't actually read it yet, I've had your novel in my collection back when it only had 40~50ish chapters... I liked the original synopsis where he ignores his childhood sweetheart and falls into deprivity only to lose it all... 👍
Pointbreak:Thank you for the praise😬 Maybe you haven’t heard of this story because I am unreliable with updates and dont get big features, so it is usually off the radar and in the trash somewhere, waiting for people to pick it out😭
yo author-san, is it polygamy? I mean does mc takes girls or onyl goes for one when there is aa entire harem chasing him?
Pointbreak:No... it is just me. sorry to disappoint👀image
Crazy_Cronie_1:yo author-san, is it polygamy? I mean does mc takes girls or onyl goes for one when there is aa entire harem chasing him?
Author fan of your book,I love this book. good job keep it up👍👍👍 But I have only one concern and that is with Harem. Don't try to increase the number too much and mostly concentrate on developing the charecters of female leads. In most of the Harem novels I read on this site. The Harem generally goes like this MC will have tens of lovers/wifes and by the end they all will become one dimensional character who love MC unconditionally without any proper reason and as a reault readers like me would get disappointed with the novel as a whole. Atleast in this novel you have given nice back stories and personalities to female leads but if you try to add a new Harem member in every arc it would only ruin the character development in long run. So please prioritize in quality rather than quantity
Thank you for enjoying My story🙏☺️ I also know the story is rather shaky due to the introduction of lots of female characters in the early chapters😅 I’m not sure where you are currently up to but it has slowed down a lot on the harem with only four official lovers at the latest cha**🥺
Vwarrior:Author fan of your book,I love this book. good job keep it up👍👍👍 But I have only one concern and that is with Harem. Don't try to increase the number too much and mostly concentrate on developing the charecters of female leads. In most of the Harem novels I read on this site. The Harem generally goes like this MC will have tens of lovers/wifes and by the end they all will become one dimensional character who love MC unconditionally without any proper reason and as a reault readers like me would get disappointed with the novel as a whole. Atleast in this novel you have given nice back stories and personalities to female leads but if you try to add a new Harem member in every arc it would only ruin the character development in long run. So please prioritize in quality rather than quantity
Author, quick question before I start reading. I understood that your early chapters aren't the best and the comments can confirm that unfortunately. What I wanna know is if it truly gets better? I really dislike full on cliche novels or where the story consistency is all over the place. Just wanna make sure that eventually the pieces get in their place and the MC starts acting like he should, and if so would u know around what chapter this happens. I wanna have an idea about when I should look for a change in style
I would say around mid to end of volume 2 that things starts to pick up, but if you make it past 30chaps without laughing once, you dont have to force yourself to enjoy the story. although i do hope that you do get to enjoy reading the story
KeNNzor:Author, quick question before I start reading. I understood that your early chapters aren't the best and the comments can confirm that unfortunately. What I wanna know is if it truly gets better? I really dislike full on cliche novels or where the story consistency is all over the place. Just wanna make sure that eventually the pieces get in their place and the MC starts acting like he should, and if so would u know around what chapter this happens. I wanna have an idea about when I should look for a change in style
