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Review Detail of pataran in Prime Originator

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pataran
pataranLv134yrpataran

Mediocre writing, OK premise, 5 harem members by chapter 30, write your bad smut elsewhere, extremely disappointed. Why ruin a story with so many harem members?

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Prime Originator

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Suzieee
SuzieeeLv1Suzieee

Then stop reading it. Why are you still reading it. Hahaha. Idyoot

_Akuu
_AkuuLv4_Akuu

Shut lvl 1

SpenceX100
SpenceX100Lv3SpenceX100

over 400 chapters in and still has only slept with 2 harem members. mind you half the unmarried women in the kingdom would be perfectly happy to sleep with him but don't confuse inherent charm with an inability to keep the pants on...

Traps_Are_Gay
Traps_Are_GayLv13Traps_Are_Gay

he's lvl 5 on my screen you little lvl 3 🤣

_Akuu:Shut lvl 1
_Akuu
_AkuuLv4_Akuu

36 hrs but lvl 5 Not sus at all retatd

Traps_Are_Gay:he's lvl 5 on my screen you little lvl 3 🤣
Worn_out_by
Worn_out_byLv15Worn_out_by

Man you real dumb

Suzieee:Then stop reading it. Why are you still reading it. Hahaha. Idyoot
Duck_God
Duck_GodLv5Duck_God

u do know the web novel version in browser doesn't count reading hours?

_Akuu:36 hrs but lvl 5 Not sus at all retatd
Cpecific
CpecificLv10Cpecific

how would he know, he is from a mobile caste

Duck_God:u do know the web novel version in browser doesn't count reading hours?
Duck_God
Duck_GodLv5Duck_God

well oof

Cpecific:how would he know, he is from a mobile caste
Sakusei
SakuseiLv4Sakusei

Not really, you don't need to read here daily to get to lv5. You only need to login daily, comment, make a review, and get likes.

_Akuu:36 hrs but lvl 5 Not sus at all retatd
Josh_Josh_2940
Josh_Josh_2940Lv1Josh_Josh_2940

How do you know that he is still reading it?

Suzieee:Then stop reading it. Why are you still reading it. Hahaha. Idyoot
Heavenly_Chaos
Heavenly_ChaosLv3Heavenly_Chaos

my heart...

Cpecific:how would he know, he is from a mobile caste
RoyalToilet
RoyalToiletLv14RoyalToilet

"Shut up lvl 1" stop coping retard

_Akuu:Shut lvl 1
Shika_Kagura
Shika_KaguraLv13Shika_Kagura

I know I'm late, but this sh#t made me laugh so hard HHAHHAHAHH, think before you want to do something lol, you could still get EXP by writing a comment give 5 EXP, replying to a comment give 5 EXP, and writing a review give 5 EXP and that is for computer browser version, and you could get EXP using apps with writing a comment give 15 EXP and watching ads give you 5 EXP and doing an event will provide a chance to get 20 EXP at most, about the reading hours he is probably reading it from computer or laptop browser, so my point is to think before you do something so you don't look like clown 🤡

_Akuu:36 hrs but lvl 5 Not sus at all retatd
R_Kirbs
R_KirbsLv4R_Kirbs

actually, no? You get exp way less than before

Shika_Kagura:I know I'm late, but this sh#t made me laugh so hard HHAHHAHAHH, think before you want to do something lol, you could still get EXP by writing a comment give 5 EXP, replying to a comment give 5 EXP, and writing a review give 5 EXP and that is for computer browser version, and you could get EXP using apps with writing a comment give 15 EXP and watching ads give you 5 EXP and doing an event will provide a chance to get 20 EXP at most, about the reading hours he is probably reading it from computer or laptop browser, so my point is to think before you do something so you don't look like clown 🤡
pataran
pataranLv13pataran

I did drop the story, I only read on mobile, however I do most of it on the high seas to avoid being robbed myself on mediocre stories.

UncleDodger
UncleDodgerLv11UncleDodger

thank you for warning I will passed this novel

dee_da_divine
dee_da_divineLv10dee_da_divine

You sound picky and experienced, I like that. What are some novels on Webnovel that you thoroughly enjoyed?

pataran:I did drop the story, I only read on mobile, however I do most of it on the high seas to avoid being robbed myself on mediocre stories.
dee_da_divine
dee_da_divineLv10dee_da_divine

Congratulations, you know nothing about how levels work.

_Akuu:36 hrs but lvl 5 Not sus at all retatd
Lolisinmyhouse
LolisinmyhouseLv13Lolisinmyhouse

hows the level 3 getting loud

_Akuu:Shut lvl 1