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WebowoboLv115yr
2019-08-31 01:33

The only thing I enjoyed reading was the game information. Personally I think the story is pretty bad first you have the whole parents killed in an accident ordeal. Is he even able to legally look after both himself and his sister? Usually in this situation they would be taken in by a relative and if not go to some sort of foster home. Next would be the power balance of the game. Next would be the power balance of the game. Its completely nonexistent. Usually all players of a game would start out with the same stats, no skills, nothing. But the MC here gets a endgame class and weapon right off the bat. And this gets far worse as the story progresses with him being able to take on level 100 and over when he hasn’t even hit level 20 and it has barely even been 10 chapters in. I just dropped it when numbers like nonillion were introduced. I could write more and start nagging about how the parents had a terrible reason for moving and just how stupid the whole ‘Stick Emperor’ thing is but I digress. Overall there is no set path for the story, it has a lackluster set of characters and a mediocre game with terrible power balancing and design flaws right off the bat.

The Chronicles of the Stick Emperor

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55 Chs

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