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Review Detail of DrewWells in Birth of the Demonic Sword

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DrewWells
DrewWellsLv54yrDrewWells

I like a MC that goes around killing people, but he should have a decent reason, in this story The MC kills people on a whim that dind’t do anything to him, moreover he Is completely hypocritical, blaming others for thing he is the first to do. It would made sense if he was born in a devious place and he can’t distinguish right from wrong, but he had a loving mother and teacher, and he was already an ***** when he came in this world. He knows perfectly right from wrong, he simply is just a shallow character that only cares about power and goes around killing people on a whim. And he is so cliché, he’s like the villain of too many stories, the baddies that what more power because he want’s more power and is evil because he’s evil without and proper reason. I hope that everybody knows that power, as much as money, it’s just a means, not the final aim, and reading about a MC that wants power without any other aim it’s quite boring. And again I would like and accept if there was a psychological growth, but fro. The beginning to the end he is the same.

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Birth of the Demonic Sword

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Abyssmoon
AbyssmoonLv15Abyssmoon

The MC has good reason to kill the people he wants to kill he makes decisions based on his enviroment , Personalty and his goals it may schock you that he dosent care about a random female hunter that would if he didnt let behind, drag him to his death. simply let her behind what is a clichy plot for a bossy female love intrest intro in most story where he saves her and at the end licks her boots that simply isnt in his personalty that like you said was build up from the beginning and has evolved in someone who does what needs to be done in a world where he is too weak If it is truly to ruthless for you then you may think about if you dont want read maybe a other novel where you got a light hearted mc who falls in one clichy after the other just to be saved by some nice thicc plot armor

MPyJM
MPyJMLv14MPyJM

What? Are we reading the same book? And do you have any real life experiences in life other than your bilateral 0 and 1 sheltered view of life to be able to put your baby boy rant and 1 star review A Dark Fantasy book? Clearly, you need to go back to your garbage bins novels, with harem, idiotic op mcs, and no real fleshed out characters, let the adults enjoy their thing and move away, you would do everyone a service including yourself.

3KBytes
3KBytesLv63KBytes

I completely agree with this review. The mc is unreasonable and do not care about anything but himself. The latest chapter was really bad, it was probably there only so he could get some spoils from the lady.

1notorious
1notoriousLv41notorious

I agree on the character being shallow and seeming like a villain, but the whole story means for him too. If you didn't see this type of nonsensical killing and craving for power from our MC coming from a mile away then I don't know what to say. It's a revenge story and he hasn't achieved his revenge yet.

SereneMind
SereneMindLv15SereneMind

This is the definition of an unfair and useless review. It doesnt help anyone to understand the strengths and weaknesses of the novel nor does it give any examples for the ridiculous claims you put in it. A review should inform people objectively and give them some information if the novel is worth theire time. It shouldnt be full of insults and criticism without any examples and good reason. So far i cant find any plot holes, plot armor or bad writing in this novel. The mc always acts for good reason and his personality is constantly consistent without any irrational changes to it.

GreatLeecher
GreatLeecherLv5GreatLeecher

I think you reviewed a different book lol

GreatLeecher
GreatLeecherLv5GreatLeecher

I think you reviewed a different book lol

InvicibleGod
InvicibleGodLv6InvicibleGod

i havent read the novel but i have to disagree with some of the stuff u write here 1st why the fk do u need a reason to want more and more power? its not just means its something that will ensure ur safety and wellbeing u dont need to aim for the best u need to improve till u cant move even 1 more inch forward for ex your cultivation is "true god" u have to do everything u can to get to the "supreme god" even if u are not threatened by anything 2nd cliche is the mc who is on the "justice's" side but is actually more villain than the villains and is a complete hypocrite for example doing everything he cans to grow stronger to protect his loved ones is what i call bull**** because always the loved ones are in trouble and need to be saved while they do nothing in return other than being annoying

DaoDaoEccentric
DaoDaoEccentricLv11DaoDaoEccentric

Tbh he does kill but IT is for a reason remember he would say he is doing this for his mom and master and to kill/ get revenge on his dad

MichaelLouisXXI
MichaelLouisXXILv13MichaelLouisXXI

Waw, such bullsh*t is precious

Doesnot_matter
Doesnot_matterLv4Doesnot_matter

Haters this Is a pretty ****ty review if I say so myself

RockNRage
RockNRageLv5RockNRage

the prob of this novel is that MC has no growth or dept, at all. He starts a psycho (for no reason, is stated that on earth he was an avrg joe) and remains such, with no change. The secondary chars are all super shallow too. They are either there to be killed by the MC ad give him resources or to blow sugar up his ass saying how strong he his. William, the first master, is the best built character. June was laughable and so Ivor and the academy headmaster. zero depth and 0 personality.

1notorious:I agree on the character being shallow and seeming like a villain, but the whole story means for him too. If you didn't see this type of nonsensical killing and craving for power from our MC coming from a mile away then I don't know what to say. It's a revenge story and he hasn't achieved his revenge yet.
vikingsaint21
vikingsaint21Lv11vikingsaint21

I agree the mc is so ****ty and cliche but the story is not that bad tho.

vikingsaint21
vikingsaint21Lv11vikingsaint21

Wow so angsty.

MPyJM:What? Are we reading the same book? And do you have any real life experiences in life other than your bilateral 0 and 1 sheltered view of life to be able to put your baby boy rant and 1 star review A Dark Fantasy book? Clearly, you need to go back to your garbage bins novels, with harem, idiotic op mcs, and no real fleshed out characters, let the adults enjoy their thing and move away, you would do everyone a service including yourself.
SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5SorcererCat

"If i can get stronger i will forsake my humanity" Interesting. Seems there is a good chance ill be dropping this LN. Forsaking humanity is no different than becoming a viscous snake and no better than bandits or many of these nobles. Seems this MC will fit right in with that group of scum if this way of thinking continues.

Lightwind21
Lightwind21Lv4Lightwind21

he does care for those who are close to him. but he wont risk his life or his "path" for them.

SorcererCat:"If i can get stronger i will forsake my humanity" Interesting. Seems there is a good chance ill be dropping this LN. Forsaking humanity is no different than becoming a viscous snake and no better than bandits or many of these nobles. Seems this MC will fit right in with that group of scum if this way of thinking continues.
Yojimbo88
Yojimbo88Lv11Yojimbo88

So trashy novels with sociopathic MCs living only for themselves are for adults? Sounds more like something a 13 year old edgelord would enjoy before they turned into a bitter incel when they got older.

MPyJM:What? Are we reading the same book? And do you have any real life experiences in life other than your bilateral 0 and 1 sheltered view of life to be able to put your baby boy rant and 1 star review A Dark Fantasy book? Clearly, you need to go back to your garbage bins novels, with harem, idiotic op mcs, and no real fleshed out characters, let the adults enjoy their thing and move away, you would do everyone a service including yourself.
neymar
neymarLv15neymar

What's wrong with that?

SorcererCat:"If i can get stronger i will forsake my humanity" Interesting. Seems there is a good chance ill be dropping this LN. Forsaking humanity is no different than becoming a viscous snake and no better than bandits or many of these nobles. Seems this MC will fit right in with that group of scum if this way of thinking continues.
pokeperson1000
pokeperson1000Lv14pokeperson1000

People seem to forget that QI for some reason censors the word “âdült”

LTbutterfly287
LTbutterfly287Lv13LTbutterfly287

Do literally 99% of all reviews on webnovel.

SereneMind:This is the definition of an unfair and useless review. It doesnt help anyone to understand the strengths and weaknesses of the novel nor does it give any examples for the ridiculous claims you put in it. A review should inform people objectively and give them some information if the novel is worth theire time. It shouldnt be full of insults and criticism without any examples and good reason. So far i cant find any plot holes, plot armor or bad writing in this novel. The mc always acts for good reason and his personality is constantly consistent without any irrational changes to it.