Review Detail of Demon_7374 in Master of Time

The plot of the story is very good, however the writing/translation quality is extremely bad. Like seriously, how did someone manage to **** up “Dibs” and write “dips”? While definitely not a 1 star or 5 star book, I am appalled that people’s expectations are so low that this book has an average of 4.5 stars. It deserves 3.5 stars at most. And the rest of the entire story is locked behind a paywall?! Seriously? The last free chapter was a year ago and the rest of the story is paid access, the author is more greedy then EA and Bethesda combined.