Overall, great story. There were some parts that almost made me lose interest, but then as I kept reading it was peaked again. Can't wait to see what other stories you write.
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LIKEHi there. Maybe you would like to support "Banished Prince Charming" novel that I had entered in the Writing Prompt Contest #94. I I am just trying my luck since it promises more exposure. It's set in the medieval times, with no system, reincarnation or whatnot. Very glad if you had picked the novel up, appreciate if you haven't done so. Lol. Cheerio