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I'm realy conflicted about this story it starts good but around ch. 10 it starts to get confusing. All this * misterie* that is drop in the story makes it just more confusing and adds unnecessary layers opon layers to the plot. While the Interaktion of the people is good, I always think that the system is wastet in the hands of the Mc, for all his intelligence that he sometimes shows he makes little of the possibility that the system offers. He has a clear goal but is own training in comparison to the other side characters falls short because he helps them and is more of a teacher to them. Overall the story is nice but I would have preferred a Mc that is more focused on his goals and a Mc that is intelligent or dumb but not kind of both at the same time. I would give it about 4 stars
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There is no system but gamer powers only(right now). the mystery and all that is because the gamer han jee han is going to appear in future and interact with raito then he will be losing all the connection with the Gaia the origin. the various different things like the sand world the big library and purple soul cloud is so that i was thinking of gathering their abilities together. my final goal is OP character. Of raito helping others as well why not? He is training on his own too and progressing so much faster than a normal person in ninja world. About poison hall and mysterious arts, they are part of another group. Dumb? intelligent? If MC is focused in only himself..........i thought about it and once I even wished him to fail the genin test and venture to the capital where he met his family clan where another drama would start but I didn't because I wanted him to be with naruto and others living (even a time would come when he has to leave)