it's really good, the storyline and especially for the unexpected event on how Jane turned. The title is really interesting and kudos to you for that, I think the title makes the people interested in reading your story. The chapters may be short but it's really good, I'm really into a horror story and you're really good. I'm definitely adding to my library. You have so much potential, Keep writing author!
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