So far, the book had been interesting and kinda fresh. I like the MC and how she tries to imitate her Dad. If I were to give some advice, I would recommend paying more attention to capital letters (like jax -> Jax) and punctuation since it is a bit confusing at times. It might help you if you download Grammarly. It helped me a lot 😉 Overall, the story is interesting, characters look fine and I'm looking forward to the new chapters.
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