Lots of handholding which is sonething I hate Giving people lots of free things even chakra for almost no readon pisses me off Not for me I guess
DreAm_b0At
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LIKEAnother thing is the random-ass time skip. It doesn't even tell you its a time skip. One day he is a kid who just got his powers and cleaning the city. Next, it just shows him eight years older, in love with indras bloodline. Like wtf? Plus the oc love interest is extremely boring. It would be okay if it was an original book but this is a fanfiction...
come on bro. you should have checked the authors name. it's the same author who made the MC give Minato lot bijuu level chakra before he was even born
Conqueror1:Almost wasted my time
Yeah in there the Mc was very hypocritical. He literally helps them when he was in the womb but didn't ask or give anything to his parents at that time. Which is very hypocritical. As this story is same as that one I Don't Want to waste my time or feel angry because of a naive and hypocrite mc.
KuroHyoudou:come on bro. you should have checked the authors name. it's the same author who made the MC give Minato lot bijuu level chakra before he was even born