Normal character who is neither acting paranoid nor creating senseless waves with his actions. Moreover I personally like the fact that he makes mistakes in his plans and admits them on his own, he doesn't act like being a reincarnation makes him too special and thus immune to laws others follow. Since the story is new the rating for update stability might change. The grammar followed has no obviously annoying mistakes. Overall a good start to a potentially interesting story.
Darkest_Night
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LIKEBest of luck. If you ever need any help with the cultivation level details then check out the official desolate era jumpchain part 1 (The Three realms), Its notes section contains a better detailed version of the cultivation system and heartforce than than the official wiki.
Darkest_Night:Thanks for the critique. I hope I can maintain your expectations.
jai_97:Best of luck. If you ever need any help with the cultivation level details then check out the official desolate era jumpchain part 1 (The Three realms), Its notes section contains a better detailed version of the cultivation system and heartforce than than the official wiki.
Darkest_Night:Thanks for the critique. I hope I can maintain your expectations.