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GGMissFortune
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Honestly pukeworthy. Writer gives the protagonist a system based on desolate era cultivation and then nerfs it to $hit tier. Don't fking write a crossover fic and underpower one verse because of "balance" reasons. This ain't fking league of legends boi.

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Ascending the Heavens in Marvel

Darkest_Night

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Darkest_Night
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That's fair, it's been a while since I read desolate era so when I began writing this books I went over everything that I could find about its cultivation system and power levels. The problem was that it was ridiculously vague and I couldn't make out the power levels of each stage because they varied so much. The next problem that I had was how to compare the desolate era power levels to the marvel verse. I honestly thought I overpowered the system because I made it so you could destroy a universe ( which I compared to a chaos world) when he reached the world god level which was stated in the light novel. If you could explain to me where I 'nerfed' the cultivation system I'll try to make some changes.

WN_grdy_mthr_fker
WN_grdy_mthr_fkerLv11WN_grdy_mthr_fker

wtf is the matter with you ... you don't have a good thing to say and just outright go out insulting someone for there work without reading the whole thing .. what kind of piss flavour breast milk did you drink while growing up to have such a smelly personality.... hahahaha have a nice day @ GGMissFortune ****er

Heretoc
HeretocLv4Heretoc

You forgot few important points : 1) As they ascend the space itself becomes firmer and more stable. What could once easily destroy a planet in the lower levels, might not even cause a scratch in later realms. 2) in DE, even a common man was far a stronger than that of MU. Plus, most of the powers in MU are one dimensional. You can't control multiple elements(mostly), telepathy, hypnosis, arcane etc. DE has far more variables. A man can easily study how to control fire and at the same time using soul for telepathy. So you can't just straight up compare them to each other. 4) Weapons. Swords that could cleave the whole planet, arrows that could pierce and destroy suns, papers which could turn into whole worlds...on the other hand? Missiles that can destroy planets, a hammer which can probably control thunder, a shield which returns.

Darkest_Night:That's fair, it's been a while since I read desolate era so when I began writing this books I went over everything that I could find about its cultivation system and power levels. The problem was that it was ridiculously vague and I couldn't make out the power levels of each stage because they varied so much. The next problem that I had was how to compare the desolate era power levels to the marvel verse. I honestly thought I overpowered the system because I made it so you could destroy a universe ( which I compared to a chaos world) when he reached the world god level which was stated in the light novel. If you could explain to me where I 'nerfed' the cultivation system I'll try to make some changes.
xRedDemonx
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s It's hilarious how you compare the worst objects of marvel with those of ED, because of course they will be better literal in marvel there is a damn gun to disintegrate everything when I say everything is everything, even a damn universe

Heretoc:You forgot few important points : 1) As they ascend the space itself becomes firmer and more stable. What could once easily destroy a planet in the lower levels, might not even cause a scratch in later realms. 2) in DE, even a common man was far a stronger than that of MU. Plus, most of the powers in MU are one dimensional. You can't control multiple elements(mostly), telepathy, hypnosis, arcane etc. DE has far more variables. A man can easily study how to control fire and at the same time using soul for telepathy. So you can't just straight up compare them to each other. 4) Weapons. Swords that could cleave the whole planet, arrows that could pierce and destroy suns, papers which could turn into whole worlds...on the other hand? Missiles that can destroy planets, a hammer which can probably control thunder, a shield which returns.
Heretoc
HeretocLv4Heretoc

Which are controlled by what? A group of people or two? DE? The moment you reach world level you can easily destroy lower level planets. So I don't see any comparison here. Marvel barely has few Universe level characters. DE? Not counting how the space gets firmer with each ascension, they have several such characters. At the end, the MC actually creates/controls the whole universe by merging with it. And please... Don't add the multiverse here. It doesn't even makes sense. Let's say physical? Apart from Hulk and Charles Xaviers brother ( whatever his name was) and few others, who can actually crush planets? At World level they are capable destroying complete worlds. So maybe Immortal level? Later they are capable of destroying while galaxies. So yeah... Energy Cultivation? By the end of their cultivation, they are literally the Dao. And apart from Beyonder, Celestials and maybe one to two others ( whose power makes no sense until authors wants. Sometimes they are nigh invincible and other times weak.) I don't see any comparison... 😅

xRedDemonx:s It's hilarious how you compare the worst objects of marvel with those of ED, because of course they will be better literal in marvel there is a damn gun to disintegrate everything when I say everything is everything, even a damn universe
xRedDemonx
xRedDemonxLv5xRedDemonx

Bro I've never read ED but at the time you started comparing the worst Marvel weapons with the ED weapons I wanted to correct that not only **** weapons but also powerful weapons

Heretoc:Which are controlled by what? A group of people or two? DE? The moment you reach world level you can easily destroy lower level planets. So I don't see any comparison here. Marvel barely has few Universe level characters. DE? Not counting how the space gets firmer with each ascension, they have several such characters. At the end, the MC actually creates/controls the whole universe by merging with it. And please... Don't add the multiverse here. It doesn't even makes sense. Let's say physical? Apart from Hulk and Charles Xaviers brother ( whatever his name was) and few others, who can actually crush planets? At World level they are capable destroying complete worlds. So maybe Immortal level? Later they are capable of destroying while galaxies. So yeah... Energy Cultivation? By the end of their cultivation, they are literally the Dao. And apart from Beyonder, Celestials and maybe one to two others ( whose power makes no sense until authors wants. Sometimes they are nigh invincible and other times weak.) I don't see any comparison... 😅
Heretoc
HeretocLv4Heretoc

Sorry! 😅 It's just that most people only know about the Avengers and few others like Mutants and probably Inhumans from Marvel. So I was only taking them into comparison. I doubt most of the people actually know about the Celestials, Tribunal, Warlock or Beyonders. Once again, sorry!

xRedDemonx:Bro I've never read ED but at the time you started comparing the worst Marvel weapons with the ED weapons I wanted to correct that not only **** weapons but also powerful weapons
Kayox23
Kayox23Lv5Kayox23

Lull not many characters in marvel can destroy a planet xD there are more than 20 characters who can destroy multiple universes with a thought ( The LT , Thanos , Beyonder , Abraxas , Galactus , Thor , Odin , Dr Strange , Eternity .... ) and for weapons think about the infinite gauntlet (Comics) , the HOTU or the The Ultimate Nullifier Ps: Beyonder Pre Recton can os DE easily

Heretoc:Sorry! 😅 It's just that most people only know about the Avengers and few others like Mutants and probably Inhumans from Marvel. So I was only taking them into comparison. I doubt most of the people actually know about the Celestials, Tribunal, Warlock or Beyonders. Once again, sorry!
Melkor123
Melkor123Lv4Melkor123

Marvel Universe is strong but they generally cannot be compared to Xianxi novels. Continents itself are bigger than suns in Xianxia because of the Qi glow and also to handle cultivators. Er Gen verse is quite strong. Characters like Ji Ning, Meng Hao, Wang Lin can match if not beat LT. Pre Retcon Beyonder is merely statements even taking into his egoistic statements he is weaker than Multi Eternity in current Marvel Hierarchy. Beings like Allheaven would be unstoppable even in his weakest form in Marvel.

pandabanana
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Mate, remember infinity stones span their own dimension and nothing else, so cross thanos out.

Kayox23:Lull not many characters in marvel can destroy a planet xD there are more than 20 characters who can destroy multiple universes with a thought ( The LT , Thanos , Beyonder , Abraxas , Galactus , Thor , Odin , Dr Strange , Eternity .... ) and for weapons think about the infinite gauntlet (Comics) , the HOTU or the The Ultimate Nullifier Ps: Beyonder Pre Recton can os DE easily
pandabanana
pandabananaLv5pandabanana

Doctor strange’s powers are based on mystical forces but most of his power is the eye of agamoto, again, an infinity stone the time stone to be exact

Kayox23:Lull not many characters in marvel can destroy a planet xD there are more than 20 characters who can destroy multiple universes with a thought ( The LT , Thanos , Beyonder , Abraxas , Galactus , Thor , Odin , Dr Strange , Eternity .... ) and for weapons think about the infinite gauntlet (Comics) , the HOTU or the The Ultimate Nullifier Ps: Beyonder Pre Recton can os DE easily
pandabanana
pandabananaLv5pandabanana

Doctor strange’s powers are based on mystical forces but most of his power is the eye of agamoto, again, an infinity stone the time stone to be exact

Kayox23:Lull not many characters in marvel can destroy a planet xD there are more than 20 characters who can destroy multiple universes with a thought ( The LT , Thanos , Beyonder , Abraxas , Galactus , Thor , Odin , Dr Strange , Eternity .... ) and for weapons think about the infinite gauntlet (Comics) , the HOTU or the The Ultimate Nullifier Ps: Beyonder Pre Recton can os DE easily
pandabanana
pandabananaLv5pandabanana

Odin and Thor can conquer multiple planets, but are in no way close to being able to destroy universes.

Kayox23:Lull not many characters in marvel can destroy a planet xD there are more than 20 characters who can destroy multiple universes with a thought ( The LT , Thanos , Beyonder , Abraxas , Galactus , Thor , Odin , Dr Strange , Eternity .... ) and for weapons think about the infinite gauntlet (Comics) , the HOTU or the The Ultimate Nullifier Ps: Beyonder Pre Recton can os DE easily
pandabanana
pandabananaLv5pandabanana

Odin and Thor can conquer multiple planets, but are in no way close to being able to destroy universes.

Kayox23:Lull not many characters in marvel can destroy a planet xD there are more than 20 characters who can destroy multiple universes with a thought ( The LT , Thanos , Beyonder , Abraxas , Galactus , Thor , Odin , Dr Strange , Eternity .... ) and for weapons think about the infinite gauntlet (Comics) , the HOTU or the The Ultimate Nullifier Ps: Beyonder Pre Recton can os DE easily
Kayox23
Kayox23Lv5Kayox23

Odin has a feat +Universal threat and Thor is stronger than him

pandabanana:Odin and Thor can conquer multiple planets, but are in no way close to being able to destroy universes.
Crytach
CrytachLv13Crytach

Dark, ignore the salty *****, she has a filthy mouth and a trashy attitude, yes your story has "minor" glitches but let's be honest it's not bad at all, And you! Salty ***** miss bad fortune, go play in a highway, you want to bad mouth an author that is trying to learn the ropes and become a better writer, and you can't even give constructive criticism?! even though he isnt even charging you spirit stones? Go screw yourself! Dumbass...🖕

Darkest_Night:That's fair, it's been a while since I read desolate era so when I began writing this books I went over everything that I could find about its cultivation system and power levels. The problem was that it was ridiculously vague and I couldn't make out the power levels of each stage because they varied so much. The next problem that I had was how to compare the desolate era power levels to the marvel verse. I honestly thought I overpowered the system because I made it so you could destroy a universe ( which I compared to a chaos world) when he reached the world god level which was stated in the light novel. If you could explain to me where I 'nerfed' the cultivation system I'll try to make some changes.
StingyGuy
StingyGuyLv4StingyGuy

If thor could destroy multiple universes why is he still having trouble fighting people.

Kayox23:Lull not many characters in marvel can destroy a planet xD there are more than 20 characters who can destroy multiple universes with a thought ( The LT , Thanos , Beyonder , Abraxas , Galactus , Thor , Odin , Dr Strange , Eternity .... ) and for weapons think about the infinite gauntlet (Comics) , the HOTU or the The Ultimate Nullifier Ps: Beyonder Pre Recton can os DE easily
Kayox23
Kayox23Lv5Kayox23

because in Comics there are beings who can create and destroy millions of universe like nothing

StingyGuy:If thor could destroy multiple universes why is he still having trouble fighting people.