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Emperor Hector Atticus Seraphiel and his knights of the Round Table. This novel is glorious with its own articulate language and beautiful medieval tone. Though I know I will never be able to perfectly repeat the words used in this story perfectly I must say 'Ohnus' to the Author. Now then onto the Review. -Writing Quality- This story's writing is beautiful with the combination of its own vocabulary and unique style of speech only small words missing and the rare case of a misspelled word remains. Personally I didn't know what to make of the writing on the first chapter however proceeding forward I began to love it. -Stability Of Updates- Only reading three chapters I can not say much personally however with only a short pause at the beginning this author is clearly very dedicated. -Story Development- I enjoy the System that was set up by the Author without being explained in an Info Dump. The Emporer cares for his people and the Knights are free to judge on his behalf without any communication shows that this is a System built on the trust between members. All together this truly is what I would consider amazing Story Development. If I had to point out one issue however is that during narration I sometimes got lost on who was speaking. -Character Design- The fact the Author takes their time to describe the characters in a slow but fitting pace is breathtaking. For some reason no matter what I can only imagine exactly what the author described especially when it came to the Emporer and the Beautiful Leticia. -World Background- Clearly a lot of time was put into developing this world and it seems the Author already has everything planned out. As we went on we were introduced to many characters but they all seemed important and in no way rushed or put to the side. Although I slightly spoiled myself reading the Auxiliary chapters first the world-building is very well done. If I had to point out one thing it would be the minor issue of details being mixed in with narration of a scene making things slightly confusing to the reader.

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I really appreciate this lengthy review! I happen to be reading yours as of the moment. I'm hoping that I'll be able to give a review such as this. Thank you so much!

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I think it's because the setting of the first chapter is different from the actual plot that you got confused? This is an Isekai novel, so the prologue was to indicate that. ^^ As for the narrations, I thought that I left enough context clues from the previous or following paragraphs, but I guess I have to go over them again. Thank you for pointing this out :D I'll make sure to rephrase if it the passages seem confusing. Have a good day!!