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I’m sorry it took me so long to give this wonderful novel a review, I’m the type to take my time in reading and digesting everything that was happening the novel. I gotta say: you took my breath away with your rich-detailed and stunning writing style. I’m being biased and all, but I’m definitely fond of very intricate and eloquent storytelling such as this one! Also, your story pacing and transitions flow smoothly like a lake that I hadn’t noticed a single thing that felt out of place and continued on reading. Not to mention, the glossary definitely helped me as I read through your novel as well as the notes at nearly every chapter. Ugh, it’s so hard to discern which characters are my favorite ones: all of them have different, endearing or intriguing characteristics, motives, and tales which is why it’s so hard to pick from any of them. Yeah, I’ll just continue reading and see. Man, your setting and world-building are so brilliant! From the King’s round table of knights, the foreign language, the demons and monsters. All of them are nicely done; normally, a lot of authors tend to info-dump their readers (hence why I only put such glimpses of details through a character’s actions, words, etc and not into the actual storytelling much), but you! You pulled it off so well that I haven’t felt the least bit of exhaustion from knowing so many details! Overall, I’m taking a huge liking to this novel. I can see a lot of effort put into it and that I look forward to reading more of this novel!
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Well, readers tend to have different sets of preferences so I guess this novel can't be for everyone. However, I assure you that you're doing well and that while it's important to listen to the critiques of the masses, it's also important to discern which ones are important for self-improvement and which ones to just take it as someone's opinion(especially if it's the matter of preferences). Regarding preferences aside, I think it matters more whether or not you like writing the story you're making. That way you won't feel burdened emotionally and start seeing it as responsibility or work as a writer. Anyhow, keep up the great work!
Yes, this is very good advice. I will make sure to discern the criticisms that will help me in improving my novel without losing the very identity of my writing style. I hope that your day is as great as mine when I saw this review. p.s. Please take care of Cider. She doesn't deserve that sh*t of a father.
Mellize:Well, readers tend to have different sets of preferences so I guess this novel can't be for everyone. However, I assure you that you're doing well and that while it's important to listen to the critiques of the masses, it's also important to discern which ones are important for self-improvement and which ones to just take it as someone's opinion(especially if it's the matter of preferences). Regarding preferences aside, I think it matters more whether or not you like writing the story you're making. That way you won't feel burdened emotionally and start seeing it as responsibility or work as a writer. Anyhow, keep up the great work!