Review Detail of Sun23 in [DELETE]

The story is very wordy. But I love how the sentences in the story looks very medieval. Which fits the setting of the story. However, it wasn't easy to fully understand each chapters because some of the difficult vocabularies used. I appreciated how you put and clarified these vocab at the end of each chapters along with some details ( story setting, characters name etc.) before the story start. The story starts with a prologue chapters which was pretty confusing on my part as I move along to read the rest of the chapters. I wasn't sure who the main character was. I went back to reread the synopsis and assume that the empress is the main character or perhaps there maybe be more that one. However towards the latest chapters, the mysterious empress pop-up was something that tug my interest. Who is this empress!? Lol, very interesting. It does take some time to get to the juicy part of the story. Nonetheless, I understand the beginning details must be a crucial setting to the story. It won't be fun if there's no hook to draws the reader in. In overall, a very descriptive and details story. Good luck, I will be waiting for the next chapters.