Review Detail of NimbusBlue in Kingdom of the Moonlight Rose

Shameless self promotion, This is just a fun project for me as I try to work towards the goal of becoming a better writer. I've simply always wanted to write a drawn out fantasy story and I hope this will be one. I hope to be better at providing regular updates for the moment I am severely lacking in this area. If you see any typos please point them out, I'll try my best to patch things up!