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2019-07-04 10:17

Wow😍 I love it! Read up to chapter 4, and yeah it's cool. It is an inspiring poem, I gues I could keep on writting song lyrics, if I keep going into it😉😉😉 Keep up the good work💪 It will do well, am sure💋

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Thank You for your review.

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May1stLv14

Thank you for your work

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May1st
May1stLv14

Have ever consider writting music? I think you will do well with lyrics

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You might call the first two chapters of this story to be lyrical. https://***.wattpad.com/story/190740508-take-1-part-cute-2-parts-strange-mix-vigorously

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Cynk_Napp:You might call the first two chapters of this story to be lyrical. https://***.wattpad.com/story/190740508-take-1-part-cute-2-parts-strange-mix-vigorously
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