Review Detail of Vayne_0688 in Fate Online: Shadow

TL:DR Terrible grammar, inconsistent writing, and generally super cringy novel. Honestly, Extra Chapter 0 from Supreme Magus is a chapter pointing out cliches in novels, and this entire novel is basically the same as this one chapter. Mc kills " a powerful person"s son, goes on the run with a girl, she dies, he becomes "an assassin" that can supposedly dodge bullets, then goes on to get revenge and murder the entire family of the dead kid, including the employees working for them.Mc dies, travels back in time and starts playing a "VRMMO" in which he gets OP stats. Two(?) days after release there are already " experts" in the game or w/e. The game has time dilation so two days in are one day IRL. Then we get told that there is a limit of 10 hours playing in the game as well, to stop no-lifers. Mc wants to be with his waifu and he "meets" her again in a gym, where he proceeds to save her by punching a guy and knocking out his mate, which makes him fly 3 meters back and falls unconscious. His grill immediately leaves the gym so he "gives them another quick beating" before running outside after her. In the span of a couple of minutes(?) he beats these guys twice, they call their "powerful uncle (or w/e)" and he beats them again.