•Super over the top OP MC. • Lack of creativity and research . • Lack of creative dialogue . •The story also just did a continues shunpo. •But hey I'm not a creative so I dont like to judge . You do you .
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LIKEMagnowa:You know with that 2 star rating that end bit just sounds passive aggressive, also, please give examples of the claims, otherwise we have no clue whether your completely right or talking out of your ass