Review Detail of Endless_Clouds in Rebirth in hunter x hunter

The idea of ​​the plot is good, but in practice it seems that it did not work and the protagonist is very scrotal. Seriously, I think the author should do a more thorough and elaborate inspection on the protagonist and his interactions with the characters of the original anime. And try to improve it, if you, as author, also think that this is possible, and if you do not think it's possible, that's fine, disregard this comment and move on to the next.